Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird
I
Among twenty snowy mountains,
The only moving thing
Was the eye of the blackbird.
II
I was of three minds,
Like a tree
In which there are three blackbirds.
III
The blackbird whirled in the autumn winds.
It was a small part of the pantomime.
IV
A man and a woman
Are one.
A man and a woman and a blackbird
Are one.
V
I do not know which to prefer,
The beauty of inflections
Or the beauty of innuendoes,
The blackbird whistling
Or just after.
VI
Icicles filled the long window
With barbaric glass.
The shadow of the blackbird
Crossed it, to and fro.
The mood
Traced in the shadow
An indecipherable cause.
VII
O thin men of Haddam,
Why do you imagine golden birds?
Do you not see how the blackbird
Walks around the feet
Of the women about you?
VIII
I know noble accents
And lucid, inescapable rhythms;
But I know, too,
That the blackbird is involved
In what I know.
IX
When the blackbird flew out of sight,
It marked the edge
Of one of many circles.
X
At the sight of blackbirds
Flying in a green light,
Even the bawds of euphony
Would cry out sharply.
XI
He rode over Connecticut
In a glass coach.
Once, a fear pierced him,
In that he mistook
The shadow of his equipage
For blackbirds.
XII
The river is moving.
The blackbird must be flying.
XIII
It was evening all afternoon.
It was snowing
And it was going to snow.
The blackbird sat
In the cedar-limbs.
In this poem, Stevens demonstrates the importance and the variance of perspective. His poem inspired my own "Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Chair."
Thirteen Ways of
Looking at a Chair
I.
Strapped above the
ground and fed.
Swaddled in a blanket
red.
II.
In the homemade dirt
I kneel.
A buzzing saw,
My granddaddy’s
hands,
A polished throne is
born.
III.
The chair across from
me is
empty.
The space you used to
occupy
devoid.
IV.
Splintered and
lopsided,
Destined for firewood
–
Another lover’s
quarrel.
V.
Skating over linoleum
floors,
Racing towards the
finish line.
VI.
Carry me,
I can’t go alone.
VII.
Contemplating the
lightning bugs and fireflies,
A swift breeze
announces a summer storm.
I slip inside,
Carrying an imprint
of wooden slats on my skin.
VIII.
A place of judgment,
questioning,
condemnation.
IX.
The backroom of a
secondhand shop –
a coat of dust
obscures
golden thread and
delicate carvings.
X.
The chair sits,
Bald spot polished,
Reflecting light from
the table.
XI.
Heavenly seat
From which the All
Mighty presides
Giving righteous
induction
Into his kingdom.
XII.
Tyra Banks whispering
in my ear
“Do you want to be on
top?”
I doze.
XIII.
row upon row
we wait
for a final
Electrifying
experience.
What item would you look at thirteen ways?
I love love love love this post. First of all, 13 Ways of Looking at a Blackbird is one of my favorite poems. I also love that you shared an original poem based on Stevens's poem. Thank you for sharing! It's absolutely lovely. I think my favorite "way" of looking at a chair has to be the thirteenth one. Such a lovely stanza. (But I'm also quite fond of XII as well. I couldn't help but smile!)
ReplyDeleteThanks :-) It's been a while since I've written any poetry (sadly), but this is one of my favorites.
ReplyDeleteI love that you shared your own inspired poem. I think my favorite is the following:
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Carry me,
I can’t go alone.
I have an old Stevens collection from undergrad buried somewhere on my shelves at home. Am going to dig it out to see what gems I can find in there.
He certainly had a unique perspective in the world. I like to imagine him coming home from his office job to record all his impressions of the world around him.
DeleteI like your seventh way of looking at the chair.
ReplyDeleteAnd the Stevens poem is also one of my favorites. There's never a snowy afternoon where I don't say the part about how "it was evening all afternoon. It was snowing and it was going to snow."
Thanks - I'm from the country where passing time swinging on a porch swing is what it's all about. My favorite stanza of Stevens' is the first "Among twenty snowy mountains, the only moving thing was the eye of the blackbird."
DeleteA beautiful post. I had forgotten how much I enjoyed summer storms on the front porch. We don't have them here. Memories.
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